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A Walk In The Rain by ~Jack-O:iconJack-O:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Nature > Fixed




I'm standing here
The water drips,
down my face
onto my neck

Mascara runs
Blush fades away
Look, you'll see-
It's really me

I'm standing here
In pouring rain
Don't join me now-
You won't understand

This feeling's pure
Soon it'll fade away,
when the sun comes out,
and drys away the day

You're looking out your blinds
But you still don't see-
You don't see pass this storm
You look right through my eyes

This rain is cold
I love the chill
I'll wait again-
For my next walk in the rain...
©2004-2009 ~Jack-O
:iconjack-o:

Author's Comments

I love the rain. I love to just stand in it, or just sit there in the rain. I guess it's about how people sometimes look at me like i'm crazy for WANTING to be in the rain, as appose to joining me....or somthing.

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~shitra Jun 11, 2004, 2:50:18 PM
It's nice and calm and has a nice meaning. I like it. :+fav:
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~shitra Jun 11, 2004, 2:50:33 PM
It's calm and has a nice meaning. I like it. :+fav:
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~shitra Jun 11, 2004, 2:51:03 PM
I LIKED THE PART WHERE I MESSED UP AND POSTED THE SAME THING TWICE WHEEEEEEEEE KILL ME
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~Jack-O Jun 11, 2004, 4:12:10 PM
Thank you Shira, I heart you.

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Goodness gracious...GREAT BALLS OF FIRE!
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~Jack-O Jun 11, 2004, 4:12:47 PM
YEAH, I REALLY ENJOYED THAT PART.

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Goodness gracious...GREAT BALLS OF FIRE!
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~saraliu Jun 12, 2004, 6:09:57 AM
I love the rain too....So cool.....

Kisses!

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Ex- Liu Moon...
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~Jack-O Jun 12, 2004, 6:12:22 AM
Yay! Rain is one of those things that you're either having a blast in with your friends, or your by yourself, just thinking...maybe i'm just babling again...hmmm -ponders-

:hug:

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Goodness gracious...GREAT BALLS OF FIRE!
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~actfairy Jun 22, 2004, 3:47:06 PM
I love the rain and the poem really captures how peoople react to that love. It is really good.:clap:

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When things are bad, we take comfort in the thought that they could always be worse. And when they are, we find hope in the thought that things are so bad that they have to get better.
Author: Malcolm Forbes
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~Jack-O Jun 22, 2004, 4:25:01 PM
Thank you!

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Goodness gracious...GREAT BALLS OF FIRE!
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~arcanem Jul 6, 2004, 7:42:43 AM
This poem is very nice...wonderfully composed. Great imagery, you can almost feel the rain. I like the pic too =)
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