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Un-deserved Fantasy by ~Jack-O:iconJack-O:





Insecurity
he tries to find himself
in this torn up town
On this damaged ground

This sudden feeling
It’s surely helping me
in this place I’m forced
to grow up in

He told me,
I’m his angel
Is this make believe?
Should I join the dream?

He told me,
I’m his angel
I’d rather die today
Then him think less of me

I told him,
To put his wings back on
He doesn’t understand
How much he has to give

I told him,
To put his wings back on
What a blissful dream
I’ll watch him fly away
©2004-2009 ~Jack-O
:iconjack-o:

Author's Comments

Self explainitory i'd say...

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:iconstandingfailure:
who is this guy.......and why would he want to fly away?

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Festivly fucked up inside....:headbang:

-Zaccharia-
:iconjack-o:
Just someone.....who knows.
:iconshitra:
Yeah, I love how about 90% of the poems you write, I can never tell who you're writing about... Anyway, I like this one. Very simple and clean. Just like your mom, or something. <3
:iconjack-o:
Wow Shira, I love you.

Eventually, when we're old and rinkly I might tell you who it's about....or maybe in a couple minutes..heh. No but seriously, gracias!


:heart: Jackie
:iconshitra:
Way to correct your own spelling, SLUTBAG.
:iconjack-o:
Way to pierce yer pinky toe, WHORE.
:iconshitra:
Oh snap.. ! It's on!!
:iconjack-o:
Yesseri, sonny!




You best run and hiiiiiide BIATCH!

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